Rewrite Art 150 Research Paper

I got my research paper feedback and i only get 39.5% for it .

I still get chance so I hope you can help me fix it and write a Library assignment and a Pre-library assignment for me.

I really need a B.

someone can help?

Here is my Teacher's feed back above:

  Your thesis statement needs to be more focussed and specific.

  While you have a few points about the culture uses of photography, the essay needed to select ONE and analyze it in depth.

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